If Adam Picked the Apple
There would be a parade,
a celebration,
a holiday to commemorate
the day he sought enlightenment.
We would not speak of
temptation by the devil, rather,
we would laud Adam’s curiosity,
his desire for adventure
and knowing.
We would feast
on apple-inspired fare:
tortes, chutneys, pancakes, pies.
There would be plays and songs
reenacting his courage.
But it was Eve who grew bored,
weary of her captivity in Eden.
And a woman’s desire
for freedom is rarely a cause
for celebration.
Wild
Give me silvery strands,
the milky growth of aging
intertwined with the sediment
of youth.
Give me stretch marks
along thighs,
one gleaming stripe
for each year this body
survived winter.
Give me scars and sunspots,
proof of every season
weathered.
Give me laugh lines
like the hyena,
rooted canyons along
eyes and mouth,
impervious to wrinkle cream,
so profound was our joy.
If Adam Picked the Apple is very good. I love it when an idea is turned around like that. I always felt uncomfortable with Eve being derided for eating the fruit from the tree of knowledge of good and evil, especially since God is supposed to know everything that is going to happen anyway. I guess the story is told that Eve was tricked into eating the fruit, but I like the Eve in this poem so much more.